Tuesday, December 26, 2017

EL10_T4


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Synonym
1) Charge for: pay for, acquire, purchase
2) Free: without charge, complimentary
3) Admission: entering, allowing entry,entrance, acceptance, access, admittance
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Essay Planing
Question for analysis:
1)  Is it much to pay for entry the museum? Does it too expensive?
2) does museum is valuable to charge?
3) how it important to charge and where money go?
4) is it expensive to pay for entry ?
5) is it normal that museum are free for entry?
6) What happen if  it is free for entry every museum and make payment as one option?
7) Do you think the money that is spent is a better use?
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Introduction
Sentence 1- Paraphrase question
Sentence 2- Thesis statement (state which one outweighs the other)
Main Body Paragraph 1 (Stronger Side)
The payment for accessing museum is much more benefit due to it contributes to economic development and make the it live longer for young generation.
Main Body Paragraph 2 (Weaker Side)
Sentence 10- Without charge of admission of museum give more opportunity for poor people lining in remote area to visit museum located in a city.
Conclusion
Sentence 13- The advantage of payment for accessing a museum is much more than advantage due to budged from this resource can be used for museum conservation.   
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Any museums require to make payment before entry whilst others are free of charge. In my view, the payment for admission is more significant advantages than entry without payments because money from visitors contribute to sustain museums and economical improvement.

Museum is the main actor which contributes to economic development for some civilization nations and many tourists rarely avoided to visit. The objective of creating a museum is to display all valuable things including ancient materials and paintings and other memorized place. All visitors have to buy ticket for entry because it is not expensive that many people can afford to do it. In addition, the major​ ​​income from this approach​ is used for renovating museum. As a result,museum can stay long term for young generation. In addition, if the admission is without charge, it is very clear that​ museum maybe disappear someday as there is no budged for​ salary for staffs, preservation and management particularly the museum in the third wold countries.

On the other hand, museum is publicly open for walk of life of people. If it is required for payment for accessing, it will limit to poor people and they don't have opportunity to see what are inside of museum. Moreover, national museum mostly locates in the city that is very difficult for people living in the remote area because they need to make more payment for accessing to view in a museum beside travelling from their hometown.

In conclusion, there is not much disadvantages for making payment for admission due to it is not expensive and tourists are willing to pay to make the museum live longer for young generation.

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