Linking word in speaking test by Liz

EL10_T4

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Synonym
1) Charge for: pay for, acquire, purchase
2) Free: without charge, complimentary
3) Admission: entering, allowing entry,entrance, acceptance, access, admittance
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Essay Planing
Question for analysis:
1)  Is it much to pay for entry the museum? Does it too expensive?
2) does museum is valuable to charge?
3) how it important to charge and where money go?
4) is it expensive to pay for entry ?
5) is it normal that museum are free for entry?
6) What happen if  it is free for entry every museum and make payment as one option?
7) Do you think the money that is spent is a better use?
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Introduction

Sentence 1- Paraphrase question

Sentence 2- Thesis statement (state which one outweighs the other)

Main Body Paragraph 1 (Stronger Side)

The payment for accessing museum is much more benefit due to it contributes to economic development and make the it live longer for young generation.

Main Body Paragraph 2 (Weaker Side)

Sentence 10- Without charge of admission of museum give more opportunity for poor people lining in remote area to visit museum located in a city.

Conclusion

Sentence 13- The advantage of payment for accessing a museum is much more than advantage due to budged from this resource can be used for museum conservation.   
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EL10_T3

Synonym
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country: nation, community, region, society
similar: very much alike, comparable, identical
product: brand, produce
world: planet, globe, nature
anywhere: unspecified area, anyplace
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Essay plan
Introduction
S1: paraphrase
In recent year, nations in the world have become the same structure due to people are about to purchase products anyplace.
Thesis statement(only the side you stand for):
I do believe that such development way is positive development tendency due to it is more beautiful and comfortable for a human.
Body
S1:
Many people buy quality and beauty product to build a house and construct infrastructures in their community.
S2: People are more comfortable due to they utilize beautiful products and make the better life with the standard product made from foreign countries.

Conclusion
In summary, I believe that the similarity of country development in the world is much more important for people.

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Essay

EL10_T2

Cam_EL10_T1

IELTS10_T4 Writing

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- Synonym
1) Life cycle: process of lifeform, biological clock
2) Species: variety, class
3) Large: great
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Writing:

Writing EL10_T3

The bar charts illustrate the number of graduate and post graduate students of British did not work as a full-time staff when they graduated from college in 2018. There were four main reasons that British students had including part-time work, voluntary work, further study and unemployment. Overall, most of graduate and post graduate students continued their study while there were not many students work as voluntary. Both graduate and post graduate students had the same idea when they graduated from university. 

At least 29,665 graduated students in the British targeted on study future. It is the considerable highest students comparing to other four options that were chosen by students including part time work (17,735 student), employment (16,235 students), and voluntary work (3,500 students).  

In terms of post graduate students, post-graduate students choose study further the most. It was accounted for 2,725 students. The number of students (2,535) who chose part-time work were slightly less than post-graduate students who study further. 1,625 students were unemployment which were higher than volunteer work (345 students).